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Funny Feeling - Dawn and Paul by ~Jewel667:iconJewel667:



A funny feeling


“Bye Paul!” Dawn said as she waved good bye-but no reply came from Paul as he was always unsocial with everybody. As Dawns smile faded Ash spoke. “Don’t worry Dawn you know how he is he don’t talk much just leave him” “yeah your right” said Dawn in a slightly sadden tone.

But then suddenly she quirked up and said “so Brock when’s the next contest!” “Next week but its going to take a few days to get through the forest and mountains” said Brock. “Yey! I bet Paul’s going to be there” she said but then went silent as she dazed into space. She always had a funny feeling about Paul he’s so strange and tall like a mystic pokemon. But never thought of anything other than a friend.

Ash shook her “wake up Dawn we need to get moving” he said hurriedly. “Ok ok let’s go!” As they were moving through the forest Dawn was gazing at the tall branches that hung over her head. “Ooooooooo this really creep huh guys” said Dawn – no response.
“Guys? Guys! Where are you guys?!” She seemed to have wandered off away from the group.

“Oh dear I’m lost and alone” said Dawn in a worried voice. She was walking backwards and felt the ground rumble. Oh dear she said she suddenly felt the ground cave in then “ARGH!”

She fell and fell until she hit the ground. “Oh dear where am I now I’m scared” she tried to get up “OW!”. She seemed to have twisted her ankle.

“Dawn what the hell are you doing Down here? And what’s wrong with your leg?” said a familiar voice
©2007-2009 ~Jewel667
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Author's Comments

Just about dawn and her feelings - i will put the second chapter later - please comment - HOPE YOU LIKE IT :D


ps: i had no idea which catorgarey in - so sorry...

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chapter 2

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:iconsamyhedgehog654:
ooo like it so far :aww:

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:heart: Roy's my Boy!!!:heart:
Pichus are soooo cute!!! :giggle:
:iconjewel667:
aw thankies!!! :thanks:

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I like to believe in things that will never happen, make believe or that aren't true - it's those things that make life interesting...some science and things i just don't want to belief! :disbelief:
:iconsamyhedgehog654:
no prob^^ :thumbsup:

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:heart: Roy's my Boy!!!:heart:
Pichus are soooo cute!!! :giggle:
:icon4glaceon:
uhhhhh how do you put your litature peice on here? i tried to put a story i wrote on here but it refused to take it! Waaaaaaahhhh....

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